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Prom Fight - Page 08 by msandborn Prom Fight - Page 08 by msandborn
Judo THROW!
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junon Sep 10, 2008  Professional Digital Artist
these are improving with each page, one crit tho...
crit: I'd just revisit the first panel of this page, thus far this sequence has been very easy to follow, but with that panel I find it hard to understand what exactly their two arms are doing to each-other, the only clue comes in the following panel. The shot is probably ok, as is the figure placement, just a little clarity in the arms/hands would help out. Keep up the marathon! each page literally has been better than the previous- great work!
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msandborn Sep 10, 2008   Digital Artist
Yeah, i was having trouble trying to draw the panel... I could possibely drop it, since the previous panel (the grab insert) may mentally flow better. Thanks for the encouragement! Oh my, yes, a marathon of tired. Going to show to Jeff's Class to see what can be done in a few days :D
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