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these are improving with each page, one crit tho...
crit: I'd just revisit the first panel of this page, thus far this sequence has been very easy to follow, but with that panel I find it hard to understand what exactly their two arms are doing to each-other, the only clue comes in the following panel. The shot is probably ok, as is the figure placement, just a little clarity in the arms/hands would help out. Keep up the marathon! each page literally has been better than the previous- great work!
crit: I'd just revisit the first panel of this page, thus far this sequence has been very easy to follow, but with that panel I find it hard to understand what exactly their two arms are doing to each-other, the only clue comes in the following panel. The shot is probably ok, as is the figure placement, just a little clarity in the arms/hands would help out. Keep up the marathon! each page literally has been better than the previous- great work!